请问如何用客气的英语词句叫人还钱？

lawrencetan001

他们是很有礼貌的哦，所以我也必须有礼貌。
虽然，人家答应每月还我一点，可是我还是要提醒他："到期了啦!"

我这里有一句，请纠正：
Good morning, may i know is it available to have my balance lately? thank u.

batman69

不知道你跟對方什麼關係，要對方怎樣還錢。。以下是非常禮貌的請求。

Dear Tenants,

Good morning. Just a gentle reminder to you.
Please remember to deposit the balance amount RM xxx into my bank account by (date).
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Do let me know (or give me a call) if you have any doubt. I would certainly ready to listen to you. (語帶諷刺）

Thank you.

Warmest Regards,
lawrencetan001  

batman69

不知道你跟對方什麼關係，要對方怎樣還錢。。以下是非常禮貌的請求。

Dear Tenants,

Good morning. Just a gentle reminder to you.
Please remember to deposit the balance amount RM xxx into my bank account by (date).
外加
Do let me know (or give me a call) if you have any doubt. I would certainly ready to listen to you. (語帶諷刺）

Thank you.

Warmest Regards,
lawrencetan001  

batman69

may i know is it available to have my balance lately? ＝》 這個句子太弱了！！

may i know 這些打電話用比較適當，用手機短訊問對方還不還錢，對方會假裝不知道。。。

lawrencetan001

batman69 发表于 16-5-2014 05:01 PM
may i know is it available to have my balance lately? ＝》 這個句子太弱了！！

may i know 這些打電 ...

其实无论怎样通知他都会还的，我只是不想让人家认为我追得太急。

batman69

lawrencetan001 发表于 16-5-2014 05:17 PM
其实无论怎样通知他都会还的，我只是不想让人家认为我追得太急。

你問的是疑問句，好像婆婆媽媽那種簡訊。。

Good morning, mate. Just a gentle reminder. You can return the money to me by this month. Thank you.
對方如果說 OK。
你回答 No Worries。

是不是直接了當。。

rexuehanzi

<Greetings> In case you missed it, this is my bank account number: xxx, any payment (including monthly xxx) can be made through this channel.
<Greetings> Our accounting staff is going to close monthly account soon, please don't hesitate to fax us your bank-in slip if you have made xxx instalment, so that we can update the monthly statement before posting to you.
我的破爛英文，希望有幫助啦，哈哈。