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有两首歌寻找人帮忙填词～～
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刚写完两首曲在＃３
大家可以听下给意见或者帮忙填词
谢谢。。。
试听: http://www.esnips.com/doc/6a555f ... /Gonna-Let-You-Hurt
Gonna let you hurt
Compose: 1v4n Lyric: 1v4n Arrange: 1v4n
<<Verse1>>
Can you tell what is eternity?
Clarity, I’d try to give it all
Other way to see this conclusion
I’ve been push around, without your sympathy
<< re-Chorus>>
I used to find out where is my sensation
Keep it inside without you
Flying so high, keep my sight out from you
Won’t let you know
<<Chorus>>
Piercing my heart, from the kisses that you left on my lips
Killing my soul, never expect something can become more
I shall make a wish, I’m gonna let you hurt
Silent, was the only solution to decrease your suffering
Hold back promise smothering my life
<<Verse2>>
In the memory that call your smile
Disappear, and vanish in the air
From that day I walk out from your room
It is too late, to make things change now and
<<Bridge>>
I like the way I try to walk away
Did not concern what you say
Loss my mood to sense a day
Please give me one more second end a day
Cut the bridge you try to make
With my own hand
[ 本帖最后由 1v4n 于 29-9-2008 02:23 PM 编辑 ] |
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楼主 |
发表于 17-8-2008 03:54 AM
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Haizzz... 看来我的英文歌不受欢迎...
都是来回一首华语歌吧....
刚好完成的新作,"我爱你不只一天"
试听: http://www.esnips.com/doc/48d479 ... i-Ni-Bu-Zhi-Yi-Tian
我爱你不只一天
词曲编唱:1v4n
<<Verse1>>
昨天的北风吹
暗示寂默
今天是否记得我
你说你不喜欢
花言语多
至少我学会沉默
<<Pre-Chorus>>
烟火有了你
变得灿烂
放在那美丽神秘的地方
笑容填满了幸福形状
生活缺少你会让我孤单
<<Chorus & Bridge>>
什么时候开始我会对你变得那么眷恋
从认识你那一年
安静享受思念
请你告诉我你是否愿意陪我走到海角天边
我爱你不只一天
<<Verse2>>
明天的那棵树
叶子凋落
后天是怎样的我
你说你不喜欢
花言语多
至少我学会沉默
<<Verse3>>
春天的你与我
躲在角落
夏天一起看日落
秋天的你与我
观看花落
冬天冻结了你我 |
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楼主 |
发表于 29-9-2008 02:21 PM
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发表于 29-9-2008 10:57 PM
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跑调了
没什么惊喜的歌曲 |
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楼主 |
发表于 30-9-2008 09:21 PM
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原帖由 林绍胜 于 29-9-2008 10:57 PM 发表 
跑调了
没什么惊喜的歌曲
哈哈,是啊...
努力学习控制音准当中...
希望下次能够带到惊喜给你啦...
谢谢你的回复~~ |
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